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Sunday, April 21, 2013

WSJ: The Return of The Serial Novel

Serialized fiction, an all-but-lost art form that was practiced by such literary giants as Charles Dickens, Leo Tolstoy and Joseph Conrad, is rebounding in the digital era. The growing use of tablets, smartphones and e-ink devices has created a vibrant new market for short fiction as readers flock to stories they can digest in one sitting.

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Hoping to make novels as habit-forming as appointment television, a handful of publishers and several new digital-publishing upstarts are experimenting with the same type of short, episodic fiction that weekly or monthly periodicals published in the 19th century.

St. Martin's Press has published five serial novels in the past year, ranging from historical fiction to erotic romance, and has three more in the works. Penguin's digital romance imprint, InterMix, is testing serialized romance and erotica, and has released three titles so far, with several others on the way. 

The science-fiction and fantasy publisher Tor recently published a science-fiction epic by John Scalzi in 13 weekly episodes.

Amazon, which is leading the way with the format, has released 30 serialized novels through its new Kindle Serials program and is adding a new series every week. Readers pay $1.99 for an entire series, and new installments update automatically. Like a TV show, the episodes are designed to be devoured in a single sitting and end with a cliffhanger.

"The Charles Dickens model actually fits better now than ever because people want bite-sized content," says writer Sean Platt, who has co-authored six digital serial novels.

The serial model could be a boon for publishers and booksellers. Breaking up a longer work enables them to charge readers slightly more for it. Authors and publishers can also use a gradual digital release to test new series and characters in a relatively low-risk way, and build buzz for upcoming print titles. But digital serials could also be bad for business if they eat away at future print profits—still the biggest revenue source for most publishers.

Publishers and writers are now wrestling with the format, trying to figure out the best price, length, and intervals between installments.

Jeff Belle, vice president of Amazon Publishing, AMZN +0.35% says the company is still trying to "fine-tune" its serial-publishing program based on reader responses. Amazon launched its serials last fall with 10 novels. The company has since added 20 more series, which range from romance to crime to supernatural thrillers. The best-selling title so far, Andrew Peterson's thriller "Option to Kill," has sold some 80,000 copies.

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"Early data indicate that shorter is probably better, and a one-week cadence works best," Mr. Belle said.

Others worry that if readers are forced to wait, they might not return. In an era when people binge on streaming TV shows and can instantly download all 20 books in their favorite crime series, the weekly-appointment model might not hold up, says Dan Weiss, publisher at large at St. Martin's, who has overseen the development of several serials.

"We originally thought it would be fun to publish brief books with cliffhangers, and publish them like a TV show on a weekly schedule," Mr. Weiss said. "But since then, with 'House of Cards,' binge viewing has come into vogue," referring to the original TV series that Netflix released all at once. St. Martin's may try publishing several episodes at once, he said, because their brevity makes them "easily digestible and phone-friendly."

Romance novelist Beth Kery wasn't prepared for the vicious backlash to her novel, "Because You Are Mine," which InterMix published last summer in eight weekly installments. The book was a hit, selling more than 500,000 copies. But some of Ms. Kery's longtime fans detested the format. Some readers were outraged over the $1.99 price tag for each installment, which added up to $16, far more than many e-books cost. Others resented being teased with cliffhangers.

"I am really sick of sitting down to read this book and just when you are enjoying it, it ends," one Amazon reviewer seethed. "Release the whole book, I would enjoy it more," another wrote.

This month, Ms. Kery's publisher finally released the complete story as a $16 paperback. It's also available now as a single digital volume, for $9.99. Ms. Kery is currently releasing another eight-part serial romance, "When I'm With You."

Publishing a novel in increments poses additional challenges for writers, who have to worry about readers dropping off mid-series, as well as new readers coming to the novel in the middle or toward the end.

Mr. Scalzi, a best-selling science-fiction novelist who released his new book serially with the imprint Tor, says he struggled at first with the unfamiliar format. 

He wanted to make sure the 13 individual episodes could stand alone but also added up to a single, seamless story for readers who chose to wait and consume it in a single serving. (Tor will release a print edition of "The Human Division" next month.)

The novel has been landing on Amazon's science-fiction best-seller list every week, and sales have grown with each episode. When the final episode came out this week, Mr. Scalzi announced that the saga would continue, telling fans on his website that the serial "has been renewed for a second season."

A version of this article appeared April 12, 2013, on page D2 in the U.S. edition of The Wall Street Journal, with the headline: The Return of The Serial Novel.

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Monday, September 17, 2012

HESITATION [short story ON SALE!, a Playgirl Forum story expanded]

HESITATION [short story ON SALE!]

A businesswoman's emotional conflict between overthinking versus her erotic needs is tested when she's caught in the rain with the man who keeps her mind and emotions distracted. But, will she overthink a

playful shower together, too?



Hesitation_ebook cover 
 _3218 words Erotic Romance short story fiction
[a shorter version published in Playgirl Magazine / Playgirl Forum]

Plus a Bonus Love Poem: A Lesson in Passion


ISBN:

978-1-938903-10-6 PDF ebook
978-1-938903-11-3 mobi

http://stories.neale-sourna.com/hesitation.html

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Sunday, February 19, 2012

Free Short Story Fiction: No Wedding Night by Neale Sourna

No Wedding Night

by

Neale Sourna

_Las Vegas NV USA; Today

Fisticuffs, as my Great Gran would say, broke out at our wedding; just before our vows were done. It was my bride’s brother against my best brother slash best man; then her sister slash matron of honor against my favorite girl cousin teamed with that cuz’s favorite BFF.

A groomsman, with valiant stupidity, waded into the fray—with the unladylike womenfolk—and got promptly damaged, slightly.

The police were called, by someone. No one’s admitting it. The cops settled everyone down. Thankfully, no one went to jail, or the hospital.

All right the hard part.

She cried, out of frustration, out of disappointment, out of embarrassment, while locked in her vestry dressing room, and she finally let me in, and finally let me talk her back to the altar to say our I do’s.

And we did, but the bad vibes hung there, I guess, contaminating everything, festering beneath our façade of happiness.

My family doesn’t like her family and ditto with her family’s feelings toward mine.

It seems that our making them both one family wasn’t working out. Isn’t this why old countries used to marry off their royal kids to their rival warring kingdom, in order to make blood peace? I must be the only one who loved history class. Of course, blood peaces resumed many a blood war.

We went to the reception, we had a peaceful meal and sweet toasts and teary eyed toasts and funny toasts, and we had our first dance, but the open bar’s prepaid liquor was fueling fires in those still burning with discontent. Did I mention countries at war? Yes. I did.

The police were called again....more on the brawl's aftermath

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Wednesday, September 28, 2011

NEW FICTION! Neale Sourna's "Rough-Me Dot Com" Short Story, Romantic Erotica

Neale Sourna's "Rough-Me Dot Com" Short Story, Romantic Erotica

Now AVAILABLE for sale, Sep 2011, with 360% MORE STORY than free version, as downloadable ebook: ISBN 978-1-938903-01-4 [Mobipocket for Kindle/Palm/Blackberry/Symbian, Adobe Reader], find everywhere online!


Dot com queen, Lara, runs an internet site for rough sex. Her own boring romantic life has her observing the online site communications of a client, named Will.

She makes contact with him, as Dennie, one of her aliases, who "works for her."

When he decides he wants to meet "Dennie" in person, Lara puts herself in the perilous position, because rough stud Will make break her company, break her, and bust her cunt to pieces.

—Read: Rough-Me Dot Com [shorter version, free]

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Sunday, April 18, 2010

Neale Sourna's Writing-Naked.com: Dialog, Description, and Character Doctoring

Neale Sourna's Writing-Naked.com



With online clients worldwide, fiction and nonfiction: USA, Canada, Australia, England, Germany, Poland, China, and more. Accepting viable clients through Elance, Guru, and PayPal (if established previous client). Click on links following to see portfolios and connect into Neale online at Elance or Guru.

Elance.com / NS Elance Writing-Editing Profile and Guru.com / NS Guru Writing-Editing Profile /
NS Resume 2010-NSourna--Writing-Naked.pdf or .htm

/ Links for Games Neale's Written / Neale Sourna's Game Writing and Design Store

(for scripts, screenplays, novels, game stories/gaming stories, short stories, sales dialog scripts, and more)

Find Neale Sourna at LinkedIn! http://www.linkedin.com/in/nealesourna
Find Neale Sourna at MySpace!

Neale Sourna's Wikipedia User Info

  • Creative Writing,

  • Dialog/Dialogue Writing and Doctoring (specific to character, history, incident),

  • Writing Character
    (developing and improving; inner and outer motivations; emotions and mannerisms),

  • Screenwriting
    [Screenwriter] / Scriptwriting [Scriptwriter] / Script Doctor,

  • Creative Web Content,

  • Game Writing [Game Writer] / Game Story Narrative,

  • Ghostwriting
    [Ghost Writer] (novels, screenplays),

  • Description Improvements,

  • Rewriting,

  • Proofing,

  • Editing,

  • Freelance Writing,

  • Online Writing,

  • Writing Ideas Help,

  • Author Publishing Consultant [Self-Publishing].

Fees vary to each individual client project. Please, just ask.--Neale

ns [at] writing-naked.com


Your screenplay, novel, or screenplay into novel, your dialog and visuals need hardcore writing and intense character rebuilding or revisualization. In your writing erotica, writing romance, erotic writing, too, it needs its to have hypnotic, sensual (all your senses) and emotional impact to have more power over your reader; so, invest in fine writing and great storytelling that makes your reader feel and experience.

Problems with one character or many characters?

  • Are they "off"?
  • "Not gelling?""Out of step?"
  • Or are they "frozen" or "lifeless,"and not "real enough"

We can work on that. I can help you improve that.

Or

I can take over and give you a rewrite that'll help.

So, if you need

  • a writer,
  • a rewriter,
  • a ghostwriter,
  • a writing consultant, perhaps
  • a mini coach for just a few hours of writing/character/plotting advice
  • or author
  • or self-publishing advice

for a "kick start" or "kick in the pants," to help you with your fiction or your voice in both fiction and nonfiction, make contact.

If you're truly ready to be serious about investing in and doing the very best for your project, contact me; when you want a voice that's strong, profound, and farseeing--whether scifi/adventure, romance, spiritual, or drama (with or without humor / humour).

Quality pricing gets you quality writing; by byline or ghost (ghostwriting).

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Sunday, April 04, 2010

Neale Sourna's Game Writer Exchange at LinkedIn.com

WANTED: Established writers, rank beginners and working in-betweeners. Share your latest job and career notice finds, give information and advice, or submit education hookups concerning game story writing, interactive fiction, & requests for short to long fiction/scripts for games or comics.

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