Neale Sourna's Writing-Naked.com: Dialog, Description, and Character Doctoring

Neale Sourna's Writing-Naked.com

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With online clients worldwide, fiction and nonfiction: USA, Canada, Australia, England, Germany, Poland, China, and more. Accepting viable clients through Elance, Guru, and PayPal (if established previous client). Click on links following to see portfolios and connect into Neale online at Elance or Guru.

Elance.com / NS Elance Writing-Editing Profile and Guru.com / NS Guru Writing-Editing Profile /
NS Resume 2010-NSourna--Writing-Naked.pdf or .htm

/ Links for Games Neale's Written / Neale Sourna's Game Writing and Design Store

(for scripts, screenplays, novels, game stories/gaming stories, short stories, sales dialog scripts, and more)

Find Neale Sourna at LinkedIn! http://www.linkedin.com/in/nealesourna
Find Neale Sourna at MySpace!

Neale Sourna's Wikipedia User Info

• Creative Writing,


• Dialog/Dialogue Writing and Doctoring (specific to character, history, incident),


• Writing Character
  (developing and improving; inner and outer motivations; emotions and mannerisms),


• Screenwriting
  [Screenwriter] / Scriptwriting [Scriptwriter] / Script Doctor,


• Creative Web Content,


• Game Writing [Game Writer] / Game Story Narrative,


• Ghostwriting
  [Ghost Writer] (novels, screenplays),


• Description Improvements,
  


• Rewriting,
  


• Proofing,
  


• Editing,
  


• Freelance Writing,


• Online Writing,


• Writing Ideas Help,


• Author Publishing Consultant [Self-Publishing].

Fees vary to each individual client project. Please, just ask.--Neale

ns [at] writing-naked.com

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Your screenplay, novel, or screenplay into novel, your dialog and visuals need hardcore writing and intense character rebuilding or revisualization. In your writing erotica, writing romance, erotic writing, too, it needs its to have hypnotic, sensual (all your senses) and emotional impact to have more power over your reader; so, invest in fine writing and great storytelling that makes your reader feel and experience.

Problems with one character or many characters?

• Are they "off"?
• "Not gelling?""Out of step?"
• Or are they "frozen" or "lifeless,"and not "real enough"

We can work on that. I can help you improve that.

Or

I can take over and give you a rewrite that'll help.

So, if you need

• a writer,
• a rewriter,
• a ghostwriter,
• a writing consultant, perhaps
• a mini coach for just a few hours of writing/character/plotting advice
• or author
• or self-publishing advice

for a "kick start" or "kick in the pants," to help you with your fiction or your voice in both fiction and nonfiction, make contact.

If you're truly ready to be serious about investing in and doing the very best for your project, contact me; when you want a voice that's strong, profound, and farseeing--whether scifi/adventure, romance, spiritual, or drama (with or without humor / humour).

Quality pricing gets you quality writing; by byline or ghost (ghostwriting).

Matt Costello and Vanessa Franklin/Ninjagirl82 on Game Writing and more at Youtube.com

The writer of loads of games like Pirates of the Caribbean: World's End for X box 360 !!!!! and written novels and screenplays and loads. [And yes, he, too, despite what job HR types ask about, says he has LITTLE TIME TO PLAY games, since he's CREATING them.]

Matt Costello How 2 write video games, 2009
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QgzzQKYLHqE

The Game of Writing Games (Story and Games) with Matt Costello Pt 1/3, 2008
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=syY3XY3LJgo

The Game of Writing Games with Matt Costello Pt 2/3, 2008
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RjL_1M-ZITI

The Game of Writing Games with Matt Costello Pt 3/3, 2008
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wfLv-NDFyoU
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Writing for a video game part 1 by Vanessa Franklin/Ninjagirl82, 2007
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nw1KpoFMrNI

Writing for a Video Game Part 2, 2007
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YewxKtxsoV4

Writing for a Video Game Part 3, 2007
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BV4IspRB5KQ
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Video Game Industry : How to Write Video Game Scripts from GameRecruiter
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0W_ImokXCUQ

Video Game Industry : Job Descriptions for a Video Game Designer
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AYzMAplBYhc

Video Game Industry : Qualifications for a Video Game Designer
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LxE2iiEKpY

Video Game Industry : About Game Design Software
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RkmlWJQZUzs
[Steam is a digital distribution, digital rights management, multiplayer and communications platform developed by Valve Corporation. It is used to distribute a large number of games and related media entirely over the internet, from small independent efforts to larger, more popular games. Steam is set apart from similar services primarily by its community features, completely automated game update process, and its use of in-game functionality.

There are over 1,000 games available on Steam, and in January 2010 Valve announced that it had surpassed 25 million active user accounts.[3] It regularly services in excess of two million concurrent users.[4] Although Valve never releases sales figures, Steam is considered by its competitors and clients to be the market leader, controlling an estimated 70% of the digital distribution market.[5]

Many major publishers have catalogues on Steam, including Electronic Arts, Activision, 2K Games, Ubisoft, THQ, Sega, Codemasters, LucasArts, id Software, and BioWare.--Wikipedia http://store.steampowered.com/]