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Monday, November 16, 2020

COVID Making Face Mask Fit Your Face (Yeah, stop breathing into your eyes and fogging glasses!)

It's inexpensive.  It works.

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Funerals & Memorials - Go Fund Me - Judy Reynolds' Family _ Cleveland OH

The Reynolds family, organized by Bryan Hoychickhttps://gf.me/u/y8bhf4 

https://gf.me/u/y8bhf4

With the recent passing of his mother Judy Reynolds, Ryder is left in a difficult situation of honoring her with a proper memorial and getting his special needs sister's care set up. 

If you know Judy, Amber and Ryder you know the situation and understand that Judy was just getting by month to month. 

Help my brother through this hardship to properly take care of the Reynolds household  and give a woman with a heart of gold a proper closing chapter.

  Bryan Hoychick is organizing this fundraiser.

$5,000 goal yet to reach

 https://gf.me/u/y8bhf4

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Tuesday, November 10, 2020

Author Showing Writing Changes, Chap 1 Becca DuMaurier (part 1)

 


 

Showing Writing Changes, Chap 1 Becca DuMaurier

      This and the next few posts will show you changes made while changing several website story chapters of a short story "novelette" into a novel, well, novel series. Here is proof that good things need time for story, character, research, and a novelist to grow something wonderful.

      Yes, the shorts were great, if I do say so myself and my client and her website visitors; but more of a good thing is great too.


Original Client Short Story_Feb 2008

_899 wds

 

Becca in the Woods Cornwall, England UK; 1680s

Becca’d been on her way to her betrothal, or rather she’d escaped from crowded, maddening London, back to her stormy, Atlantic tossed Cornwall coast;,; three hundred miles further west than most London courtiers would ever venture.

 

The whole world was in mad upheaval! Pirates raided coasts. Neighbor killed neighbor, for God and Right. Their Catholic king’d run away and his daughter, with her Dutch Protestant husband, now ruled; as Becca’s healthy loveliness and strong family name remained besieged by an earl, whose grown heir had died, and now he wanted another, by her.

 

Unlucky Becca.

 

She’d lost two babes; both to fever, then lost her beloved, gentle husband in the king’s senseless wars and now this earl, older than her father, had reached out his covetous hands, to make her his countess, in payment for her father’s impending bankruptcy.

Both men had...more... https://www.patreon.com/NealeSourna

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