Doing a rewrite for Orchid Games' Heartwild Solitaire Game Series on my original texts and....

Doing a rewrite for Orchid Games' Heartwild Solitaire Game Series on my original texts and I've been given the "rewrites" down by Sandlot. AMAZING. The romantic game is for adult women first but the E for Everyone had them editing out "nude" (although the male leads sculpts nudes), "naked," "touch," "kiss," "stroking," "caressing," "heat," "wet," "thigh," a fully deleted sex scene, and my favorite "prude."

So, I'm rewriting from the original for E my way. Amazing. They even added a violence that was more subtle before. Amazing.

http://www.orchidgames.com/heartwild_solitaire [http://www.heartwild.com/?ref=2] and http://www.orchidgames.com/heartwild_solitaire_book_two

Neale Sourna's Online portfolios (script, novel, story excerpts, client article links):

http://profile.guru.com/667152
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http://www.Neale-Sourna.com
http://www.Writing-Naked.com

http://www.neale-sourna.com/games.htm

http://www.orchidgames.com/heartwild_solitaire ,
http://www.orchidgames.com/heartwild_solitaire_book_two ,
http://www.orchidgames.com/heartwild_solitaire_classic/quiz
[Heartwild Solitaire, Heartwild Solitaire: Book Two games and Quiz Game]

http://www.margravemanor.com/ ,
http://www.margravemanor2.com/gameinfo.php
[The Secret of Margrave Manor, Margrave Manor 2: The Lost Ship 2 games]

http://www.weddingnight.com/ Short stories
http://www.romantic4ever.com/romantic-fiction/index.html Short stories
http://www.romantic4ever.com/d_how_we_met/100408-five-and-dime-store.html

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